Tony

For a other school project we had to write a story based on the picture above. Photo graphed by Bill Sullivan, I found this picture on his web site at http://www.3situations.com/BillSullivanWorks/MT%20MASTER%20pre%20.html. This is not my best story so any suggestions are welcome.
Tony, age 58. There Franky waited behind the pillar of the sub way station. He waited until the right moment, BANG!!!!
Tony was a 1st generation Italian, for he loved his family very much. He was taught that he must honor his family. His father was named after the great godfather Don Corleone. He taught tony the ways of the family business. Later trough the years once he became the new godfather after his fathers death he made a deadly mistake. One of his fathers friends came to him asking him for help.
“Please Tony will you help me, I asking for justice. They burned down my house, stole all my money and beat my son to near death. Will you help me, and kill these people.”
A moments long pause while tony thought of his father and what he might say. “ You come to me now asking for help, after all these years. Are you just using me are you truly coming back and will become my friend, a friend of my fathers?”
“Yes please I ask for justice to my family!”
“ Ok I will help you, but you must always be there for I might call upon you at any time .”
“Thank you, your father will be very proud!”
There he left was a grateful smirk on his face. Tony ask for his right hand man to go take care of these so called people. But he made the bad mistake of not knowing who these people were and to never start a inner war between families, for the Rossi family were not killers. When ever you mess with a other family Mafia you will pay the price causing a inner city war between families. Tony's men found the Bandinos house and scouted there area waiting for them to leave and ambush the family. The family left there house for a afternoon shop for there dinner. There in incognito the men of the fable Rossi family waited for a open shot. That day they killed the only son of the godfather. Franky was furious! They hunted down Tony, were he barley escaped with his life , but with the lost his wife and brother in the shoot out.
Now coming out of hiding 10 years later he restarts the business hoping that old friends will still help him regain his families honor. The Godfather of the Bandinos was angry at the thought of this man coming back into the business. Weeks on end Tony stayed in hiding, knowing that his old enemy would be outraged to hear that he continue the family business. From a reliable source the Bandinos heard that Tony would have to leave the safety of his own home to make a business trip through the sub way. He wanted no mistakes this time so the head godfather of the Bandinos went himself. There he waited with a gun in hand for Tony to come into sight and to end this family feud. Tony pass the gate into the sub way, and BANG!!!! There lie dead on the floor was the godfather, Franky and Tony with a gun in had.
10 comments:
hey commenting back on your comment back or whatever
im so sorry brandee i didnt mean to spell it wrong i promise. ill just call you BB okay?
well i spell everything wrong so dont take it personal.
hahah my lifes okay i mean how could it be bad i got alexis hahah
yup yup
how is your life????
JJ
Cool post. That guy really does look like he should be in the mafia.
Fine I will comment on my comment or what ever. I confuzeled! O well, Yeah i'm not the greatest speller either. Well nothin could be bad if you have a girlfriend or boyfriend, vic, versa.
oh dont worry BB youll find someone i promise:) i mean any guy would be lucky to have a girl like you:)
who said I didn't have one?
oh im sorry! i just thought im sorry brandee forgive me???????? please????
you probobly do im sorry!!!!!!
well hes a lucky guy just about as lucky as i am but not quite as lucky hahah
i mean alexis is just perfect hahahah
No no I didnt mean it that way! Im sorry, o and I forgive you. Well you got lucky Alexis is awsome and really nice.
O i just remember i just got a myspace, like 2 minutes ago and I like hardly no how to use it, but yeah so you need to help me out.
Hey whats up?
feel free to post a comment on my blog cause im like really bored.
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